Awesome
The simplicity of the first minute is amazingly lonely and sad.
To be honest I would have preferred that the whole song and don't like what comes after.
Also I would prefer just the filtered background voice. The foreground voice seems too... low quality and dispassionate and a bit overpowering.
The lyrics are ok. They don't grab me but at least they don't sound cheesy (which most do, tbh).
Anyway that's a lot of criticism, but I really do think the beginning is fantastic (!), and I would like to hear another version taking into account what I said. :)